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Video Game Review Parents
where can i find video game reviews for parents?
http://www.esrb.org/index-js.jsp look for the system and what game and they will show you.
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A Parents Guide to Playstation 2 Games: A Handbook to Playstation 2 Titles (Mars Parent's Guides)
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A Parent's Guide to Computer Games: A Comprehensive Look at PC and Macintosh Titles (Parent's Guide series)
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DescriptionProviding parents with a reliable source of informed advice on video and computer games, this updated edition features important reviews and system information on the latest releases. Arranged by genre, publisher, and industry rating, this book gives parents detailed descriptions of games and suggestions regarding appropriate age groups... |
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My Baby Girl
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DescriptionYou re the mom or dad and your baby needs your love and care to grow! You will need to do everything real parents do feeding changing bathing playing to put your baby on the right track to development... |
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My Baby Boy
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DescriptionMy Baby Boy is a game that simulates life for baby care with as much affection and tenderness as a real parent. Watch them grow, change form and develop from 0 to 14 months by using all the functionalities of your portable console (breath, voice, stylus, etc... |
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Genius [Old Version]
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Descriptiontakes the names of your friends, colleagues and competitors and transforms them into mind-blowing anagrams / A puzzling game and brain twister |
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Math Magic (Jewel Case)
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DescriptionLearning basic math is easy and fun when you're studying with the Standard Deviants. Written by professional educators and based on the hit public television series, this program helps kids learn addition, subtraction, multiplication, division, and much more... |
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HEALTH BEATS V3 - STAYING HEALTHY - CORE LEARNING (WIN 98,ME,NT,2000,XP/MAC 8.1-10.1 OR HIGHER)
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DescriptionParents, teachers, and other educators have continuously sought ways to instruct children in a fun and interactive way. Counting games, alphabet blocks, and activity books have long been staples of "fun learning," and these have most recently been supplemented by educational technology... |
Family Feud Review
2 Comments
I think you are a fine writer! Your structure and punctuation is all good and I can picture what you have written in my head…I am not really into scifi so I couldn't tell about content but you definitely have potential. However, I would try and only use all caps if it is extremely necessary, and "when THE ACCIDENT happened" should probably be italics rather than all caps but sorry that has nothing to with the question at hand! Yes, you are a good writer.
Sometimes for feedback on my work or for proof reading I go to reviewfuse.com…people are pretty honest there. Check it out.
Cherry,
I think it's a fine story, and if you keep writing it will come faster and easier.
You have a few typos that need to be corrected – have someone read if for you to find them it's hard to edit your own work.
I don't know what a ghost portal is or what it does.
You did not explain why the parents were glum – if you leaves things unexplained it causes the reader to wonder about that and it detracts from the story.
Keep writing.